Tuesday, January 31, 2012
Monday, January 30, 2012
Sunday, January 29, 2012
http://www.guardian.co.uk/books/2010/feb/20/ten-rules-for-writing-fiction-part-one
Ten rules for writing fiction
Elmore Leonard: Using adverbs is a mortal sin
1 Never open a book with weather. If it's only to create atmosphere, and not a character's reaction to the weather, you don't want to go on too long. The reader is apt to leaf ahead looking for people. There are exceptions. If you happen to be Barry Lopez, who has more ways than an Eskimo to describe ice and snow in his book Arctic Dreams, you can do all the weather reporting you want.
2 Avoid prologues: they can be annoying, especially a prologue following an introduction that comes after a foreword. But these are ordinarily found in non-fiction. A prologue in a novel is backstory, and you can drop it in anywhere you want. There is a prologue in John Steinbeck'sSweet Thursday, but it's OK because a character in the book makes the point of what my rules are all about. He says: "I like a lot of talk in a book and I don't like to have nobody tell me what the guy that's talking looks like. I want to figure out what he looks like from the way he talks."
3 Never use a verb other than "said" to carry dialogue. The line of dialogue belongs to the character; the verb is the writer sticking his nose in. But "said" is far less intrusive than "grumbled", "gasped", "cautioned", "lied". I once noticed Mary McCarthy ending a line of dialogue with "she asseverated" and had to stop reading and go to the dictionary.
4 Never use an adverb to modify the verb "said" ... he admonished gravely. To use an adverb this way (or almost any way) is a mortal sin. The writer is now exposing himself in earnest, using a word that distracts and can interrupt the rhythm of the exchange. I have a character in one of my books tell how she used to write historical romances "full of rape and adverbs".
5 Keep your exclamation points under control. You are allowed no more than two or three per 100,000 words of prose. If you have the knack of playing with exclaimers the way Tom Wolfe does, you can throw them in by the handful.
6 Never use the words "suddenly" or "all hell broke loose". This rule doesn't require an explanation. I have noticed that writers who use "suddenly" tend to exercise less control in the application of exclamation points.
7 Use regional dialect, patois, sparingly. Once you start spelling words in dialogue phonetically and loading the page with apostrophes, you won't be able to stop. Notice the way Annie Proulx captures the flavour of Wyoming voices in her book of short stories Close Range.
8 Avoid detailed descriptions of characters, which Steinbeck covered. In Ernest Hemingway's "Hills Like White Elephants", what do the "American and the girl with him" look like? "She had taken off her hat and put it on the table." That's the only reference to a physical description in the story.
9 Don't go into great detail describing places and things, unless you'reMargaret Atwood and can paint scenes with language. You don't want descriptions that bring the action, the flow of the story, to a standstill.
10 Try to leave out the part that readers tend to skip. Think of what you skip reading a novel: thick paragraphs of prose you can see have too many words in them.
Thursday, January 26, 2012
Tuesday, January 17, 2012
Friday, January 13, 2012
Author I Like
Lori Wick has many books.
The series I like the most are The Californians series
and Kensington Chronicles series.
The others are pretty good too.
The series I like the most are The Californians series
and Kensington Chronicles series.
The others are pretty good too.
Publishers: Christian and Non-Christian
In Canada:
http://christianwriterscorner.wordpress.com/list-of-christian-publishers/
http://www.publishersglobal.com/directory/canada/publishers-by-subject.asp?publishers-of=Christian
http://www.track0.com/ogwc/resources/canpublishers.html
In USA:
http://www.plymouthbrethren.com/publish.htm
http://www.topicsites.com/publishers/christian.htm
http://www.topicsites.com/publishers/book-publishers.htm
http://christianwriterscorner.wordpress.com/list-of-christian-publishers/
http://www.publishersglobal.com/directory/canada/publishers-by-subject.asp?publishers-of=Christian
http://www.track0.com/ogwc/resources/canpublishers.html
In USA:
http://www.plymouthbrethren.com/publish.htm
http://www.topicsites.com/publishers/christian.htm
http://www.topicsites.com/publishers/book-publishers.htm
Here are some authors I like
Tracie Peterson : Castles
Kathleen Morgan: As High as the Heavens
Carol Umberger: The Scotish Crown Series
Diann Mills: Texas Legacy Series
Susan K. Downse & Susan May Warren: Heirs of Anton Series
Kathy Mary Hake: Fancy Pants
Kathleen Morgan: As High as the Heavens
Carol Umberger: The Scotish Crown Series
Diann Mills: Texas Legacy Series
Susan K. Downse & Susan May Warren: Heirs of Anton Series
Kathy Mary Hake: Fancy Pants
Thursday, January 12, 2012
Scene and Sequel
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YaMggjGDUHM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4jLFtSkuY2w
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tiZWfPAP_8Q
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UOCsrBJxvlA
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qVyaTXyo9-0
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z6IIIVCd0yk
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jGDmF33od_o
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3_OesBpIDIQ
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4jLFtSkuY2w
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tiZWfPAP_8Q
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UOCsrBJxvlA
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qVyaTXyo9-0
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z6IIIVCd0yk
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jGDmF33od_o
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3_OesBpIDIQ
Finding Editors, Publishers and Contests
I've found out that there are different kinds of editors. So, we need to be careful to see which editor we will work with. Some editors may not be suited for our type of writing. If you do a historical novel, make sure you have an editor that knows the subject you are writing about. Here are some websites that I've found helpful.
Get published:
http://www.getpublishedtv.com/
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WGlqpU4YQJg
Historical Novel Editors:
http://hns-conference.org/editors-and-agents/
Link for some contests:
http://www.sources.com/Fandf/Index.htm
Christian editors and publishers:
Get published:
http://www.getpublishedtv.com/
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WGlqpU4YQJg
Historical Novel Editors:
http://hns-conference.org/editors-and-agents/
Link for some contests:
http://www.sources.com/Fandf/Index.htm
Christian editors and publishers:
How to Write a Book, etc.
Here are some links.
Structure of writing a book:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=54l835una7A&feature=related
Novel Outlining:
http://pbackwriter.blogspot.com/2007/09/novel-outlining-101.html
Writing Clubs:
http://www.literatureandlatte.com/links.php
http://www.writersvillage.com
Structure of writing a book:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=54l835una7A&feature=related
Novel Outlining:
http://pbackwriter.blogspot.com/2007/09/novel-outlining-101.html
Writing Clubs:
http://www.literatureandlatte.com/links.php
http://www.writersvillage.com
I've decided to write books instead of making jewelry.
Why not? I've been wanting to do it for a few years, so I got some info on how to do it and went for it. I got into a writing club called Writer's Village University online and took some courses to learn. I'm still taking courses and learning. So, we'll see how it goes.
I actually got into a writing contest with NanoWrimo, another writing club and wrote my first novel. It's only a draft, but now the real work begins. I need to make it professional so people will want to read it.
I'll post the different websites that I've found interesting along the way. At this point, I'm debating into buying a software for editing. Not that it will do the job of an editor but it certainly will help in the technicalities I think.
If anyone knows of this program called "Style Writer 4" please let me know. I'd love to hear your feed back.
I'll be posting some websites that were helpful to me.
Have a nice day!
Ezmiralda.
I actually got into a writing contest with NanoWrimo, another writing club and wrote my first novel. It's only a draft, but now the real work begins. I need to make it professional so people will want to read it.
I'll post the different websites that I've found interesting along the way. At this point, I'm debating into buying a software for editing. Not that it will do the job of an editor but it certainly will help in the technicalities I think.
If anyone knows of this program called "Style Writer 4" please let me know. I'd love to hear your feed back.
I'll be posting some websites that were helpful to me.
Have a nice day!
Ezmiralda.
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